The red seemed a bit overwhelming to me, but if that's the team's
color or something, it may be justified.

I liked the team picture page, but make the most out of it.  There's
not much difference in size between the page photo and the photo that
pops up in the window.  I'd make the window photo larger, fill the
frame you've created,  give 'em a closeup of the player.

The "Extra" page needs to be fleshed out a bit.  It seems kind of
empty, and the text alignment seems kind of random.

That's my two cents, and probably worth every penny.  Best of luck to
you.

-Ray